Sometimes her lips tasted sweet
Like the lollipop she had pulled out moments before
Or salty
Like the nuts she had been nibbling on...
Caffeine
Sleepless nights and bleary eyes...
Or wet
A detox diet...
Brandy and chocolate
A bitchy sleepover with the girls...
Cookies and cream
crying, screaming down the phone...
oranges
Another detox diet...
And i waited for the chapped, dry lips
That had seen no food or drink
Unmoisturised lips that delivered a small kiss...
A small soft kiss that said
I know
You did it before
You will do it again
But i forgive you.
22 comments:
Nice, that. Good stuff!
uuummm...wht did u do o
lol- i didnt do anything!:)
good 1
thank you:)
LOL!
You know what caught my attention? "Salty like the nuts she had been nibbling on."
Hehehehe.
I need help.
that was a good line!!
is this ur first time on my blog??
YES!
Nice... Didn't know u did poetry too.. Me likes!
DB!! dig deep!! theres loads of poetry there!! thanx:)
LOL.. I now have a holiday project then!
yep!! its not that hard- im not a subcriber to lengthy posts!
Nice concept..
Didn't get the
"Or wet
A detox diet..." line though.
A bit slow tonight.. :)
awwww nice..seems like u have many facets, didnt know u write too!
@ Roc..I think she was referring to drinking water?? I THINK..
Roc- it means drinking water...the best strat to a good detox diet!slow huh?
BC- its becoming more and more apparent that u dont actually read my blog!!
wud go bck n read more of ur stuff..this was nice.
aaaw thanks:)
Boo the last part confused me :S
Explain! Okaythanksbye x
"A small soft kiss that said
I know
You did it before
You will do IT again
But i forgive you"...
I wonder what that "it" is...cheating, eating disorder.....????
when i wrote it i thot cheating..
but now that u mention eating disorder..
hmmm..
xx
Okay now that I kindasortaalmost understand it...I'm not too sure about that forgiveness bit, but anyway people are different...maybe Lips Girl is really in love...
Me too i want to recieve welcome call....send me an email or something.
aww..i like alot!very simple, yet vulnerable and sweet.(my attempt at literary review..lol) is there sexual innuendo here..lollipop, nuts? or vera is just polluting my mind? lol
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